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Prompt 30. Brave New World

We’ve been given a beautiful world.
Isn’t it perfect?
Empty save for the beauty of nature,
Built by the universe
Especially for us.

Our prayers were heard. This dimension —
Isn’t it perfect?
Peaceful and painless existence,
No obstacles in sight,
Cleansed by the universe
Especially for us.

We’ve uncovered a baffling truth.
Isn’t it damning?
We have our coveted infinity
Under the condition
That our emotion is forfeit,
Taken as a sacrifice
From us.

We’ve made a completely wrong choice.
Isn’t it stupid?
Our love will be lost,
Our lives will be plain,
Erased by a stranger force
From the Universe’s canvas.

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4 thoughts on “Prompt 30. Brave New World

  1. Love this “We’ve made a completely wrong choice.
    Isn’t it stupid?
    Our love will be lost,
    Our lives will be plain,
    Erased by a stranger force
    From the Universe’s canvas.” You are a great poet! ~Jackie

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